A summer fundraising event is set to take place at MACE Ballinrobe on July 18. The local store is inviting community members to join in raising money for Debra, a charity that supports individuals affected by Epidermolysis Bullosa (EB), a painful genetic skin condition often referred to as "Butterfly Skin."

The event will run from 3 PM to 5 PM and promises entertainment for all ages, including live broadcasts from Mid West Radio, traditional Irish dancing, face painting, food sampling, and a charity raffle with ticket sales benefiting Debra. Store owner Dermot Fallon expressed gratitude for the community's support over the past year and looks forward to welcoming everyone on the day of the event.

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The text says "a charity that supports individuals affected by Epidermolysis Bullosa (EB), a painful genetic skin condition often referred to as 'Butterfly Skin.'" This shows a bias towards sympathy and kindness, as it describes the condition in a way that evokes feelings of pity and concern. The use of the word "painful" adds to this emotional appeal, helping readers feel sorry for those affected. This bias helps the charity by making readers more likely to support it. The words chosen create a positive image of the charity and its cause.

The text states "Store owner Dermot Fallon expressed gratitude for the community's support over the past year and looks forward to welcoming everyone on the day of the event." This shows a cultural or community bias, as it highlights the importance of local support and community involvement. The mention of gratitude and welcoming everyone creates a sense of inclusivity and friendliness, which helps to build a positive image of the store owner and the event. The use of these words makes readers feel like they are part of a larger community. This bias helps to create a sense of belonging and encourages readers to participate in the event.

The phrase "entertainment for all ages" is used to describe the event, which shows a bias towards inclusivity and diversity. This phrase makes it clear that everyone is welcome, regardless of age, which helps to create a positive and welcoming atmosphere. The use of these words makes readers feel like they can bring their whole family, which increases the likelihood of them attending. This bias helps the event by making it seem more appealing to a wider range of people. The words chosen create a sense of excitement and fun.

The text mentions "a charity raffle with ticket sales benefiting Debra," which shows a class or money bias, as it highlights the charitable aspect of the event and encourages people to spend money on raffle tickets. The use of the word "benefiting" implies that buying tickets is a good deed, which helps to justify spending money. This bias helps the charity by encouraging people to donate money through ticket sales. The words chosen create a sense of giving back to the community.

The text says "the local store is inviting community members to join in raising money for Debra," which uses language that leads readers to believe that participating in the event is a good thing to do. The use of the word "inviting" creates a sense of friendliness and inclusivity, making readers feel like they are being asked to do something positive. This bias helps the store by making it seem like they are doing something good for the community. The words chosen create a sense of social responsibility.

The input text expresses several meaningful emotions that contribute to its overall message. Gratitude is a prominent emotion, evident in the store owner Dermot Fallon's expression of thanks for the community's support over the past year. This emotion appears to be moderately strong, as it is explicitly stated, and serves to establish a positive tone and convey appreciation for the community's involvement. The mention of gratitude also helps to build trust and creates a sense of warmth, making the reader more receptive to the event and its purpose. Furthermore, the use of words like "welcoming" reinforces this emotional tone, implying a sense of inclusivity and friendliness.

The text also conveys a sense of excitement and anticipation, particularly in the description of the event's entertainment, which promises "entertainment for all ages" and includes activities like live broadcasts, traditional Irish dancing, and face painting. This emotion is relatively strong, as it is conveyed through vivid and engaging language, and serves to generate enthusiasm and interest in the event. The use of action words like "live broadcasts" and "face painting" adds to the dynamic tone, creating an impression of energy and fun. This excitement is likely intended to inspire action, encouraging readers to attend the event and participate in the fundraising efforts.

The text also subtly conveys empathy and concern for individuals affected by Epidermolysis Bullosa (EB), referred to as "Butterfly Skin." The use of descriptive phrases like "painful genetic skin condition" creates a sense of sadness and sympathy, although this emotion is relatively mild compared to others in the text. The purpose of this emotion is to create awareness about the condition and garner support for the charity, Debra. By evoking empathy, the text encourages readers to care about the cause and consider contributing to it.

The writer uses emotional language to persuade readers and guide their reaction. Words like "traditional Irish dancing" and "food sampling" are chosen for their appealing sound, creating a sense of enjoyment and community spirit. The repetition of ideas, such as emphasizing the event's entertainment value, increases emotional impact by reinforcing positive associations with the event. Additionally, comparing EB to "Butterfly Skin" creates a vivid image that sticks in the reader's mind, making them more likely to remember the condition and its impact. These writing tools steer the reader's attention towards supporting Debra charity by highlighting both enjoyable aspects (entertainment) & sympathetic aspects (supporting those with EB). Overall these tactics effectively shape public perception & encourage people’s participation at MACE Ballinrobe summer fundraising event on July 18th .